http://cj2017.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] cj2017.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] cj2017 2010-06-24 08:36 am (UTC)

What a twist!!

Heh, thought they'd got away with it, did ya?

I have to say that I'm happy that your writing Sarah and John a little closer.

Happy that you're happy :-) They had some nice stuff towards the start of the fic as well. I wanted Sarah to consciously be trying to defer to John in this one, to try and follow his lead, his choices. To continue that opening her hands theme from the end of Breaking Point. But then, she'd only take that so far. Soon as the bullets start to fly, that's the time when her instincts kick in. She'll only let him take the lead up to a point...but she is trying.

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